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albinoni 2



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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:52 pm    Post subject: your own songs,lyrics,poems ;)

Here's one of mine

The Aloneliness


How was good the day
in which you were born
Covered by flowers
Sorruonded by love

And then the years spend
and the Pain calls
with her long wings
until the end

you can't defend
you can't neglect


It comes silently
It comes uninvited
This is the time for Aloneliness


years by years
night by night
day by day

a large amount of Pain
an invitation for the Rain


you can't resist
you have to persist


It comes very soon
It never ends
This is the time for the Aloneliness


Marco
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 9:28 am    Post subject:

That was a really beautiful one...

You really know how to write...
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:06 pm    Post subject:

^Thankie Very Happy *g*
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Serenityindemise



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 6:05 am    Post subject:

one of mine

"Further from the ground"

Decending
Fast pace
Light goes dim
Then finally black

All alone
So cold
Nothing to grasp
Comotose

Fixated on nothing
Blank stare
Scared

A startled jump
Sinking back to contentment
Sad but calm

Falling
Slowly
Falling
Further from the ground
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Nothing Toulouse



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 11:23 am    Post subject:

these ones are awesome

one of mine:

Dreaming

A dream
is like a falling feather
touching your closed eyes
and leading you into your own world

A dream
Is a better way
to forget your troubels
you won't bleed

You can touch
everything you ever wanted
Without regrets
no rules
just yourself

Flying away
on wings made of clouds
tasting yellow seas
dreaming your problems away

So just stop hurting yourself
just close your eyes
and let your thoughts
lead you away
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 6:00 pm    Post subject:

Wow you are just cool i liked both..... Cool Very Happy Shocked
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Nothing Toulouse



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:07 pm    Post subject:

thanks
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albinoni 2



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2004 8:16 pm    Post subject:

Burn The Autumn Leaves


If you want to cry,my friend
you can do it,here next to me
for all the time we spend toghever
and the words you have never said,to me

Real friends don't need words
The Smile and the Cries come close
Dear frend,lay down on those leaves
But i am still here with you,you know where,
where to find me

Just burn the Autumn leaves
don't fear the smell of it
So you will finally find
the life you have got within

Tomorrow would be great for we both
our union made with stone
we are the best in this world
your smile won't be unknown

Don't care about the others
They scream,They whip,They torture
with thier fake lips
you are forever

Just burn the Autumn leaves
don't fear the smell of it
so you will finally find
the Life you have got within

Marco
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 11:21 pm    Post subject:

Awesome Cool
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albinoni 2



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PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 11:21 pm    Post subject:

burdeN wrote:
Awesome Cool


Thanks..... Cool
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 11:29 pm    Post subject:

Oh, there's no need to blush
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 12:05 am    Post subject:

SelfCuttingMisery

When i grow old i'll do that way
i kept on repeating years ago
my job will be perfect

A wife and a male child
Toghever Happy as never before
now i'm grown up
and i am Sad as never before

Too much times i said
"i want to die"
Let me count the times
Now I want the world dies with me too

That world......

SelfCuttingMisery
eat me,from feet to head
SelfCuttingMisery
swollow me as the time spend

Why that world for me?
it's written in the book of nothing
in the grave of the oldest
in the grave of the youngest

In the smile of the whore

that world......

SelfCuttingMisery
eat me,from feet to head
SelfCuttingMisery
swallow me as the time spend

that world....
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 4:43 pm    Post subject:

wow..awesome again (:

Autumn

Autumn breezes
outside my window
trees trun red
more time to breathe again


I trun my head down
if I just sigh
will you hear me
or will you answer?


I wonder where you are
I always longed for this season
I'm learning to dream
without being afraid

Break the silence
words are spoken
falling leave's whisper to me
and bring my autumn back
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 9:25 pm    Post subject:

^Thanks Very Happy

I liked a lot your too Very Happy

above all the conclusion "and bring my autumn back" Cool Cool Cool Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 11:07 pm    Post subject:

hehe thank you (:
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